From 94775bb0a0641f6eab67a05dde441758ccb1c613 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Evgeny Nerush <eugene.nerush@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 27 Oct 2023 15:03:55 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] fix misprints in Readme

---
 README.md | 23 ++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index d099fab..dc8e454 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -7,14 +7,15 @@
 (todo) [Readme in Chinese](README.cn.md)
 
 [XRay (aka ProjectX)](https://xtls.github.io/en/) is a frontier solution to surpass the internet censorship. It can work as a server and as
-a client, but it's configuration sometimes confusing for a newcomer. So, here is a script which helps to
+a client allowing to guide traffic through a VPS outside the region of censorship. XRay configuration can be confusing for a newcomer,
+so, here is a script which helps to
 
-- install/uninstall (todo: upgrade) *XRay*
+- install/upgrade/remove XRay
 - generate credentials and server/client configs
 - (todo) add/delete users to the configs
 
-First make the script `ex.sh` executable, then run it with a desired command. Use `./ex.sh help` to see the list of all available commands
-and `./ex.sh install` to start interactive prompt which installs and configures *XRay*.
+First, make the script `ex.sh` executable, then run a desired command with it. Use `./ex.sh help` to see the list of all available commands
+and `./ex.sh install` to start interactive prompt which installs and configures XRay.
 ```
 $ chmod +x ex.sh
 $ ./ex.sh help
@@ -24,15 +25,15 @@ $ sudo ./ex.sh install
 ### Prerequisites
 
 For manipulations with configs, [jq](https://jqlang.github.io/jq/) is needed, it can be found in repositories of almost all popular Linux
-distributives.
+distributions.
 
 ### How it works
 
-With current configs, *XRay* creates a tunnel between the client (your laptop, phone etc.) and the server (your VPS). The tunnel uses *VLESS
-Reality* protocol that obfuscates traffic and in our case imitates [grpc](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GRPC). For the censor the tunnel
-looks like a usual connection to a site. The server responses to https requests as some popular site thus it is not suspicious for an active
-probing. On the client side *XRay* creates a socks proxy which can be used by your Telegram or web
-browser like this:
+With current configs, XRay creates a tunnel between the client (your laptop, phone etc.) and the server (your VPS). The tunnel uses VLESS
+[Reality](https://github.com/XTLS/REALITY/blob/main/README.en.md) protocol that obfuscates traffic and in our case imitates
+[grpc](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GRPC). For the censor the tunnel looks like a usual connection to a site. The server responds to https
+requests as some popular site thus it is not suspicious for an active probing. On the client side *XRay* creates http/https and socks
+proxies which can be used by your Telegram or web browser like this:
 
 ![browser proxy: http/https proxy 127.0.0.1 at port 801, socks v5 host 127.0.0.1 at port 800](browser-proxy-settings.png)
 
@@ -50,4 +51,4 @@ For Windows, MacOS or Android you can try Nekobox, v2rayNG or ? (TODO): tests an
 
 [Configs](https://github.com/XTLS/Xray-examples/tree/main/VLESS-gRPC-REALITY) on which the template configs are based.
 
-(TODO) logging, choose domain names or geoip, configs for phone...
+(TODO) choose domain names or geoip, configs for phone...